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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2020 2:52 am 
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Name: Eclipse Dragon Veil
Rank: B rank
Cost: 20
Range: 15 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Tiger | Snake | Boar | Dragon
Description: Kurono surround himself with the black smoke as he adds shape transformation turning the black smoke into a dragon like object. Once this has been done Kurono sends the dragon rushing at the opponent until in crashes into them or any surface. Once the dragon has made contact with any surface in turns back into smoke.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Smoke to be Active.

Name: Right Hand Eclipse
Rank: A
Cost: 30
Range: 5 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Ram
Description: Kurono swings his Black Ashen Arm at the direction of his opponent, emitting a burst of super heated black smoke towards them. The black smoke burns at a third-degree burning in the process of slamming into the target. The smoke will linger on the target allowing Kurono to snap his finger to denotate the ashes creating an explosion.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Ash to be active.

Name: Hidden Eclipse
Rank: B
Cost: 20
Range: 10 M
Type: Nin/Taijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: N/A
Description: Kurono hides inside the Black Smoke solidifying the ash and creating two kunai knives. Surrounded by the black smoke Kurono dashes at the opponent in quick succession slashing any and all opponents within the black smoke leaving a trail of Ashes around them letting him snap his finger to detonate an explosion.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Smoke to be active.

Name: Pit Black Onslaughter
Rank: S
Cost: 40
Range: 50 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Tiger, Ram, Horse, Dragon, Snake, Boar, Tiger, Boar, Dragon, Snake, Monkey, Tiger
Description: Kurono emits a large amount of Black Smoke engulfing the area and the target/'s. Kurono creates thousands of small senbons with the black smoke sending them all into the opponent slashing, and piercing them. He then can snap his finger to cause a massive explosion.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Smoke to be active.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2020 12:51 am 
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Name: Eclipse Dragon Veil
Rank: B rank
Cost: 20
Range: 15 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Tiger | Snake | Boar | Dragon
Description: Kurono surround himself with the black smoke as he adds shape transformation turning the black smoke into a dragon like object. Once this has been done Kurono sends the dragon rushing at the opponent until in crashes into them or any surface. Once the dragon has made contact with any surface in turns back into smoke.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Smoke to be Active.

Name: Right Hand Eclipse
Rank: A
Cost: 30
Range: 5 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Ram
Description: Kurono swings his Black Ashen Arm at the direction of his opponent, emitting a burst of super heated black smoke towards them. The black smoke burns at a third-degree burning in the process of slamming into the target. The smoke will linger on the target allowing Kurono to snap his finger to denotate the ashes creating an explosion.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Ash to be active.

Name: Hidden Eclipse
Rank: B
Cost: 20
Range: 10 M
Type: Nin/Taijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: N/A
Description: Kurono hides inside the Black Smoke solidifying the ash and creating two kunai knives. Surrounded by the black smoke Kurono dashes at the opponent in quick succession slashing any and all opponents within the black smoke leaving a trail of Ashes around them letting him snap his finger to detonate an explosion.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Smoke to be active.

b]Name:[/b] Pit Black Onslaughter
Rank: S
Cost: 40
Range: 50 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Tiger, Ram, Horse, Dragon, Snake, Boar, Tiger, Boar, Dragon, Snake, Monkey, Tiger
Description: Kurono emits a large amount of Black Smoke engulfing the area and the target/'s. Kurono creates thousands of small senbons with the black smoke sending them all into the opponent slashing, and piercing them. He then can snap his finger to cause a massive explosion.
Drawbacks: Requires Black Smoke to be active.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2020 12:37 am 
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Name: Demon Infernal
Rank: S
Cost: 40 | 30 Upkeep
Range: Self
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: N/A
Description: By allowing his body to access and tap into his Black Ashen Arm superheated chakra, Kurono can engulfs his body in flames as it begins to burn up and take an ashen form. Once his flames settles down his appearance will drastically change. In his Demon Infernal form, Kurono has a pair of horns piercing through his head and a skull-like face with a singular large eye in the centre. Fire consistently emitted out of his mouth and eye socket. These horns sprouted from his eye sockets, while his neck opened to create his new mouth while his original became his new hollow eye. Kurono's Strength, Constitution and Reflex all gain a tier Boost respectively, as well his fire technique burn brigther and gain 5 extra damage.
Drawbacks: Demon Infernal takes 1 post to charge and activate but can be interruptedby any A rank techniques. This form also heavily drains stamina, once this form is deactivated he losses a tier to stamina. As well he losses a major disadvantage towards his Coordination for the remainder of the topic.

Name: Fire Release: Emperors Flaming Scythe
Rank: A
Cost: 30 | 20 Upkeep
Range: Close | 5 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive | Defense
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Tiger | Ox | Snake | Horse | Dragon | Tiger
Description: Kurono creates a small sphere of fire around his palm. Adding chakra transformation the sphere takes the shape of a scythe approximately 7 feet tall. This scythe is like no other Kurono can use this scythe to attack with heavy flame slashes that deal A rank of damage for every slash as well Kurono can deflect incoming attacks by spinning the scythe in a windmill like manner. When deflecting attacks it can deflect up to A rank lightning, Wind and fire up to three attacks it can deflect.
Drawbacks: When trying to deflect water and earth techniques it can only do so up to B rank and twice for each of of them.

Name: Fire Release: Emperors Sacred Light
Rank: S
Cost: 40
Range: 40 M
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Tiger | Hare | Snake | Boar | Dragon | Tiger
Description: Kurono extends both arms forward as he creates an orb of fire from his palms. The orb will begin to spin until it becomes flat turning into a disk, once this happens the disk will shoot out in a beam of flames burning everything on its path, the destructive power of this technique can penetrate mountains creating holes threw them. The bean of flames is 3 meters tall and 3 meters wide.
Drawbacks: N/A

Name: Iai Hand-Sword: First From Fire Moon
Rank: B Rank
Cost: 20
Range: 15 M
Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: Ram
Description: Kurono ignites and creates a sharp-blade of flames on his palm of their hand, and swings it in the direction of their target, creating a crescent-shaped flame that blows the target backward, while dealing heavy damage.
Drawbacks: This technique can only be used when Iai Hand-Sword is active.

Name: Hand-Sword
Rank: S
Cost: 40 | 10 Upkeep
Range: Self
Type: Ninjutsu | Taijutsu | Fighting Style
Sub-type: Offensive | Defense
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Custom
Handsigns: N/A
Description: Hand-Sword is a unique fighting style created by Kurono. This fighting style allows Kurono to use there hand/'s like blades, by releasing chakra into there hands then using chakra transformation Kurono can turn his hands into sharp blades that can slash threw opponents with ease. This technique allows Kurono to gain a tier to both Strength and Coordination. This fighting style was created with sub-techs to be use there's seven different Hand-swords technique that fall under this category.
  • Hand-Sword: First Form Fire Moon
  • Hand-Sword: Second Form Moonlight
  • Hand-Sword: Third Form Daybreak
  • Hand-Sword: Fourth Form Red Sun
  • Hand-Sword: Fifth Form Sunset
  • Hand-Sword: Sixth Form Dusk
  • Hand-Sword: Seventh Form Sun Wheel
Each sub-technique has there own cost.
Drawbacks: Kurono losses a tier in Strength, and Coordination for 2 post after the technique has been used.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:58 pm 
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Demon Infernal - Are the stat losses permanent? Is there a way to interrupt the one post charge?

Emperor's Flaming Scythe - I disagree with the idea of a technique spawning a Mastercrafted item. You could give this item an appropriate amount of durability, instead. Is the deflection just for flavor, or is it meant to imply some level of inherent deflective ability? If the latter, I'll need some kind of clarification on that. Up to what rank it can deflect, how many times, etc..

Emperor's Sacred Light - I'm a little hesitant about the clashing with Bijuu Damas thing. Everything else about it seems fine, as long as it stays at its size and doesn't actually cut mountains clean in half -penetrating through them is fine, however.

Fire Moon - When you say blade, do you mean like a sword? I'm having a hard time picturing this one. It just needs to be significantly different from the samurai exclusive Flash Technique (think getsuga tenshou from Bleach).

Iai Hand-Sword - Same thing as above. Also, how long do the drawbacks last?


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2020 5:32 pm 
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